I'm truly so nervous to publish this chapter. Deep somewhere inside I feel Like it's not going to be good enough to be read by beautiful people but I'll try my best at it!❀✧
I'm trying a new, different way to write this story, I want it to be better than my first one, which didn't come out pretty... As I thought it might be.. (I'm thinking of rewriting it sometime Since it was just a try-) But you could always help me improve!♡
*clears throat* Ahem, here we go with the very first chapter of this story.
“Moving On To Rise In Love”
Part : 1
“Falling”
Chapter 1
The carnival in the town was the fun most event. Everyone took part in it, from kids to teens, adults, friends, lovers, and families. Foodies came around to taste meals, kids to enjoy swings and have sweets, maybe see a glimpse of the circus held or the magic show. Couples just need time together, they can adjust anywhere, to be completely honest. And some people like us are in desperate need of free time to spend out as a family.“There! There!” my little brother yelled, pointing his little index out to the ice cream shop.
“Aw,” I couldn't help but put a bright smile on my face seeing him so excited.“Let's please just let the others know we're heading there” I suggested. Jordan still holding onto my hand in his tiniest. Only at the age of five, he knew a lot. He was extremely intelligent and smarter than average kids of his own age. The blonde, cutest young man with chocolate brown eyes that I feel so proud calling my brother.
I nearly dragged him all the way around, away from the ice cream shop to where my uncle, aunt and parents stood. We usually used to get together whenever they visited us on plenty of occasions such as birthdays, Christmas, Easter and sometimes random days too.
I let go of Jordan's hand right about some steps away from where our family stood, “You stay right here, I will talk to them” I instructed my cutest brother who nodded his head, respectfully.
I walked to them. All of them were busy chatting. I caught my mother and my aunt laugh at I don't know what. Perhaps, they brought out a subject that was funny?
“Mom, Jordan wants an ice cream, we'll just be right there” I let her know. I didn't want her being worried about where we were off to. She always asked us not to roam 'round without telling anyone since might cause problems. “Okay, but don't roam 'round too far”, she had her eyes locked at my aunt's face, her hand raised, waving up to down in a rude manner, clearly asking me to leave her and my aunt alone.
I sighed out, shook my head, returning back to my little brother. I could never understand other people but him. I found everyone and everything so unlikable or maybe there was always a lot I disliked? Whatever, if there could at least be somebody who was kind enough to deserve liking but some kids.
“Did she say yes?”, Jordan asked this innocent question, starting right in my eyes, a spark of gleam in his'. I smiled a warm smile at him, wrapped an arm around to pull him closer to me, “She did. And We're going to get lots of ice creams!”
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