Ah, we've all been there. You're cleaning out some drawers and you come across that god-forsaken short story you wrote in second grade about how unicorns and dogs teamed up to save the world from an evil pizza guy. You, being curious, picked it up a...
A/N: I am going to be reacting to this story as I go, and my reactions are going to be in bold font. I'm going to be entering the story as the original so there may be spelling/grammar mistakes. I haven't read most of these in years and this is going to be my first time rereading them, so this will be fun lol
Once upon a time, there was a kindhearted, VERY smart girl named Pippa Lou. She lived in a small town in the state of Mississippi, with many cheerful people. Exept (except) for one uncheerful person: Jeca Mctary.
Disclaimer: A lot of the names I came up with in past stories are extremely weird. Prime example: Jeca freakin' Mctary.
Jeca was rude, a big teaser, selfish, foolish, and most of all, JEALOUS OF OTHERS (in all caps).
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Well, at least she has... flaws???
All of the adults thought that Jeca was a little angel, but she wasn't. Jeca was a brat. (oof). One peticular
*insert British accent* peticular
One peticular Tuesday, Pippa Lou was finishing her math homework when the wind began to swirl swiftly around Pippa Lou's house. The tree branches hit the ground with a thunk. The earth began to shake with a loud, rumbling noise. Pippa Lou anxiously looked around the shaking house, wondering what in the world was going on.
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Outside, a huge tornado swirled around Pippa Lou's house, and with a tint of hurricane and earthquake to complete it.
define "a tint"
Pippa Lou sprinted to the basement as fast as she possibly could. Pippa Lou's heart was beating a mile a minute, and her eyes were as big as saucers. She could even hear the next door lady, Ms. Treeline, screaming as loud as a middle schooler when they find a pimple on their face. (ah, the classic overused pimple simile.) Then Pippa Lou knew what was going on. She heard a shrill laugh coming from the icy mountains.(Mountains?? I thought this was Mississippi)Yes, this was Jeca Mctary. All Pippa Lou needed to do was to STOP Jeca, but how?
