New Diary.

Entry 4

Guys! Guys! Guys!

Hi!

Anyway, I've been having a lot of trouble with my book, Pendants of War. I know that I'm meant to have the plot already figured out, but my style of writing makes me create stuff along a very faint guideline. And this particular book is extremely hard to write! All that's troubling me is the fight scenes. I try to vary everything, but the movements and descriptions based around spells are extremely hard for me. You say make a Water Spell, I say "f*ck that!" You say make a fight scene, I say "Are you crazy?!".

Even the characters emotions are hard for me! Here's an excerpt of the third chapter.

I fell forward into the wind, trying to resist the force I was being subjected to. But to no avail. I was thrown back onto a shard. The piercing pain shattered me. I screamed in agony, the pain searing my torso. I tried to move, but the pain intensified ten-fold. My mind fell blank. Darkness surrounded me, my vision lost. The last things I heard were a thump and a faint voice, crying "ITS ALL MY FAULT!!"

See what I mean?! I suck at dis! Listen, if you think you can make good spell descriptions or fight scenes, can you help me? I will give you a shoutout and a dedication in the fifth chapter!