Just wanted to say that my poem got 2nd place in a contest I entered!! I still can't believe it! It's up in one of the veterans halls or something..so yeah! Oh, and if you have any constructive criticism for me, fell free to tell me! I'm always looking for ways to improve!
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My Poem
Soldiers come from near and far
Not knowing who they truly are
The battlefield a smoky grey
Skies of blue fade away
A single dove flies through the sky
For peace and love remains at high
My love, my heart, will stay with you
You saved my life and countless others too
In Flanders fields their bodies lay
Each and every single day
And every time you shed a tear
Remember soldiers dying each year
Lest we forget our hopes and dreams
Are not always, what it seems
Their in our hearts for evermore
Because they fought a deadly war
