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Giovanni's pov

"Tired...I'm tired I can't stop working."

I keep making food, worse of all I can't stop and take a brake,I need to provide food for my siblings and father.

"Giovanni HURRY UP THERE IS NO TIME TO REST!"screams my boss "yes sir..." i say as I keep making food as I see people waking in and out of the restaurant.

13 hours earlier

Ring...Ring...Ring! The alarm sound blasts in my ear making me hit till it stops ringing. I stand up still feeling tired but better than yesterday, I change and make my way to wake my brother up.

I opened the door softly as I make my way to his bed that is placed in the corner.

"Despierta... necesitas comer antes de ir a la escuela."

I think of how hard his life must of been not having a mother figure(father figure), not bieng able to eat for one to two days till I find food for them to eat.

"Despierta" he slowly stands up as he rubs his eyes and suddenly hugs me I look at him surprised not knowing why suddenly hugs me.

"Que paso? Estas bien? Alguien te iso daño?" I ask with worry as he just continues to hug me he pulls away. "No, estoy bien, déjame vestirme y voy a comer." I sigh with relief that he is ok and I stand up from my crouching posisiong and make my way to the kitchen to make food.

I open the fridge and the only thing I see is milk I look up to the top of the fridge and see three pieces of bread I grab the pieces of bread and I start toasting them one by one.

I see as Mateo takes a sit on the dining chair, he stands up and makes his way to the fridge to get the milk he looks at me and says nothing he pours himself milk and sits down I make my way and give him the piece of bread.

"Esto es lo único que nos queda... Prometo que compraré comida, está bien?"

He looks at me and he softly smiles "Gracias" I make my way to wake up my Dad he sits up and I help him onto the wheelchair and I leave so he can get change I go to my sister and my room and knock softly I slowly open the door and wake up my sister she wakes up and I leave the room.

My dad makes his way to the Dining table as I put a piece of toasted bread and a cup of milk in front of him "Que es esto?" I look at him "Voy a compar comida hoy no te procupes,hoy tenran algo que comer." He doesn't say anything and takes a bite of the bread.

Isabela comes out of her room and makes her way to sit in the dining Table I place the bread and milk on the table and she looks at the bread with disgust

"Que es esto? Crees que me voy a comer esto?"

I look at her with sadness "estodo lo que tenemos, si no te lo quieres comer dejalo ahi yo me lo como"
She stand up and throws the piece of bread in the trash, I look at the trash can and I look up as she walks away with the cup of milk as I walk to throw the empty milk carton.

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Hello! This my first story so I accept criticism(please be nice)these first chapters are going to be a inside of what is happening in both of there lives and no Mateo the character is not in love as in romantic love with his brother you will see why he is so nice to his older brother and you will see why they all act how they act.

[Chapters are going to be longer.]

How was my first chapter?

Thoughts on the characters

Giovanni?

Mateo?

Isabela?

The Dad?

Other?

Bye-bye!

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