The Kings Queen ( Billdip)

Chapter 1 the deal and dreams ( rewritten)

Dipper pov

i went to bed thinking on what great uncle ford said he wanted me to be his apprentice and i could stay here in gravity falls and learn from him. my mind was racing with all the thoughts and then i realized my sister , she was already telling me i shouldn't do it that i need to stay with her but that when i realize she never done anything for me im the one always putting my wants and needs behind me for her. i gave up my job just to save some guy she met at the pool that left and never came back. this made me angry as my thoughts turned to all the times i gave my stuff up for her and helped he but then she left me when i needed her help.

???? pov

that right kid just let yourself be consumed by your anger they never loved you and i will and ill make you my perfect queen and we shall rule these meat sacks together forever. I trapped my beautiful pine tree in the dream letting everyone he knows show memories of how they used and abandoned him when they wanted He soon will be easily convinced to make a deal and he shall be my Queen for all of enternity

No one pov
The demon teleported to infront of his queens worthless sister smirking . " hello I heard you wanted your summer to last forever I can help with that you know I just need something in return" he spoke possessing the body of a man she trusted the time traveler.  The demon smilled in the possess body. " what do you need?" The girl sniffled rubbing her sweater over her face cleaning up the tears. " just this small rift from your grunckles lab it so small he won't even noticed " he smilled nervously . " I bet dipper has something like that " she mumble digging through her bag. Bill heart pounded with excitement ready for his world domination to start he had to get back to his pine tree and finish his nightmare to make a deal with him. " here you go " she spoke snapping the demon out of thought as she handed it to him. The demon eye shown through and smiled and smashed the orb releasing the rift. Be crackled evily as the girl was unconious . As for my deal here your never ending summer shooting star . He snapped and a bubble started to glow holding her inside creating her sick fantasy world. He snapped and chains held it in place leaving it to float there. He released the body flying off to his sleeping pine tree petting his head smiling .

Dipper in his dream was crying covering his ears as he was shown the memory again of everyone loving his sister and not caring for him.  The demon floated into his Queen head hugging his dream self petting his head. " ahh pine tree don't cry for me" he spoke. " b-bill it hurts " dipper relplied crying . " I know and I'll make all the pain go away" bill spoke softly hugging his pine tree. Dipper sniffled smiling brokenly " please " dipper spoke. Bill nodded " I'll make you my Queen and get rid of the pain and love you " bill spoke knowing the boy was broken enough. Dipper shook the hand curling into bill chest shaking. Bill smirked kissing dipper a blue flame surrounded them and all of dipper friends and family disappeared and erased from his mind. His ears turn to cat like snow leopard and snowleopard tail his body turned more curved and filled out and eyes grew bigger and more round with a bit of blue breaking into his brown eyes. Dipper relaxed and fell unconious as his mind and body where changed to the likings of the demon who held him

Dipper was placed in a dream left there to heal and to grow while his king set everthing up.

Bill smilled but snickered going back to reality as humans know it floating around. " my friends while my Queen rest let's party " he yelled as his friends cheered. " where are my niece and nefew demon" ford yelled out angrily aiming his gun. " your niece is who you got to thank sixer she has her own little bubble with her forever summer and dipper well you will never see him again" bill laughed evily leaving behind a shocked meatsack.

In the dream realm dipper was playing with the animals running around happily tail wagging and ears twitching. 

Everthing was fallling into place for the dreams demon Bill Cypher.

( I hope this rewritten first chapter is good please let me know I'm hopping to make a better book)