so you all know that i sort of made my OC a bit too OP i want to get your opinion on that is she too OP and also am i doing ok? i want to know i jst want to know because I'm getting views but no feedback i need feedback to know if i am doing anything right and i'll use those to improve the writing and if it's telling me something is wrong i'll try and fix it.
anyways is Yuna to OP or is the powers of the Naruto/ Boruto universe just too much for the BNHA i don't know i'm doubting myself of making this story and the plot, i know i'm really focusing the story on Yuna but it just feels right.
please tell me in this part if you think so of my thoughts that would be utmost apprieciated and will help me improve alot just tell me if i made her too OP and to much focusing just on her, plus i want to tell you that i may just write alot in one chapter because from now on i will try to incorporate the other p.o.vs in there of the other characters but not following everything like the private conversation with All Might and Deku so that is one thing that is not here but it will sometimes come up.
anyways i just want to say thanks for making this a my best writing yet and getting me over 100 reads let try and hit over 1k!! thanks
and i'll see you guys in the next chapter buh bye
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Symbol of the Uchiha (boruto x Bnha x Fem OC Sarada Sister) *heavy Re-editing*
FanfictionThis story is under heavy construction and will be relocated to a new book entirely. Yuna Uchiha the newest addition to the new generation of Uchiha and the one time she was having her training with her dad getting her Sharingan and magenkyo at a yo...
