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Feedbacks: Hello, co-author! Your title is intriguing and catchy. Your book cover somehow reminds me of Twilight books but anyways, it's minimalistic yet catchy. Your blurb is just one sentence but informative. Siguro mas okay if you try to play with words and make it more intriguing. The first part is more like a synopsis and a very effective one I must say. Nakakita lang ako ng errors regarding sa paggamit ng past or present tense ng mga salita. Your plot is more like a fantasy and mystery for me. But still, it's really interesting. All your characters were well portrayed. Andoon 'yung emotions.
I would like to commend your writing style dahil maayos ang flow ng story. Although, I noticed grammatical and technical errors. If you have questions or if you want me to point out the other errors, feel free to message me. Overall, I really enjoyed reading your story. Mapanakit din ang ending naalala ko tuloy fav song ko which is The one that got away. Anyways, good luck and keep writing!
