The Obsecure Downside of Fame

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Title: The Obscure Dowside of Fame

Author: Obscunima

Reviewer: ruboftommy

Genre: Teen Fiction

I totally love the cover

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I totally love the cover. It shows the main characters, however it doesn't show much more than that, more details can be added to improve it. But it's very well made, clear and pleasing to the eyes. I also think it suits that 'downside' mood.

In the blurb it's said "he's the number four most famous singer in the world..." it'd be better as "he's the FOURTH MOST FAMOUS SINGER IN ThE WORLD..." I like the length of the blurb, it's well written.

The chapters were very well arranged and neat, no incidence of missing paragraphs. Also an existence of reasonable paragraph length.

There were very few cases of errors but I came across a misuse of a comma. A few typos were present as well like: "...And my voice could go is* high as Ariana Grande's..."

I really like the story idea. It's a unique one and the main characters are not common ones I've come across before.

It's a very interesting and different plot. I liked the pacing and order of events as they didn't move too fast or too slow. It's also really understandable but I'd say it needs some flavor, I'd account that to the fact that only five chapters were read which is good cause it shows that events weren't moving too fast.

I enjoyed how free the book was of grammatical errors which made it more enjoyable and easier to read. I'd definitely like to read more of it.

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