Terror (Ted x Nugget)

Introduction

Hey guys this is my new book!

Ted:

Ted is a, small individual. Short, surprisingly. But he's smarter then Felix, maybe even smarted than Dr. Danner, most of the staff and students are aware of Teds high intelligence from being partnered with him, having to watch him do standing presentations, and teaching him, though no one talks about it. He acts oblivious and dumb for the sake of his brothers pride, Ted has no pride. His self esteem is low and he can't even bring himself to acknowledge that he's his own individual and not some slave towards anyone who's above him.
He's a very apologetic, nervous, shy person. Many of the other kids pity him knowing his relationship with his brother, surprisingly even Cindy and Buggs don't mess with him.
75% of his weekdays is spent following Felix around like a puppy on a short leash, the other 25% is spent on school. The weekends are uneventful unless he's Felix's punching bag. Ted can never bring himself to say no to his brother.
Many of the other kids like Kid (player), Jerome, Penny, Billy and Lily often try to talk to him but their attempts are always spoiled by his possessive brother. Felix can't stand the thought of someone taking his brother away from him, so he terrorizes Ted so he's to scared to question or disobey him.
Though..Ted does have a secret...

Nugget:

Nugget is an outgoing person. He's also a very possessive person with what he sees as his or something he's fond of.
He hates Felix. No exceptions, just utterly despises him. He can't stand the way he treats his brother, he's seen him hit Ted, yell at him, and terrorize him. It infuriates him. But he can't say he wouldn't do the same.
You see, Nugget has many mental problems and he knows. Though he doesn't show it, his parents refused to let him be put in a special ed class because of it being embarrassing to them to have a fucked up kid.
His friends know about his psychotic tendencies, his possessiveness, his hatred towards Felix, and how much he adores Ted.
Many of his friends like Kid and Penny find him scary and wouldn't recommend getting on his bad side, others like Cindy, Billy and Lily who have known him long doesn't mind it at all. But either way all of his friends are okay with him. I mean, have you met Cindy?
Nugget knows that Felix is aware of his hatred towards him. But he doesn't know if Felix knows about his fondness of his twin brother.
He still refuses to tell anyone his real name. All of the teachers have been told to call him Nugget, curtesy of Cindy.
Cindy and Lily are, surprisingly, the only one who knows his real name. But they will not use it unless Nugget is okay with it.
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