Second Chance (Betty x Frisk)

Read This If Your Curious

I said in a note before the newest chapter was released that I rewrote the whole chapter because it was to sinister for my liking.

Well I am going to tell you what I wrote because I wanted to and it's gonna take a while for me to write the next chapter. Also, it's not gonna be written how I write the chapters

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Miles was wrapped up in chains by Helen who was smiling at him, Helen started to question why Miles would attack Frisk. Miles said that he cared about him, Helen was surprised, then offered Miles to join him.

Miles was surprised and was thinking, during this Frisk woke up to Betty shaking him. Betty explains what happened then they check the forest to see Miles refusing to help Helen.

Helen then started manipulating Miles to help him, saying how was his best friend and Miles should help his best friend. Miles agreed, Helen and Miles left. Betty and Frisk followed them to and old cabin that was abandoned and broken.

Helen then showed Miles all of the souls he has stolen or taken, Miles then sees Ambers soul but it was cracked and damaged. Miles was trying to convince Helen to let Amber go and they can be friends again.

Helen refuses because he is fully aware of who Betty actually is, and Ambers soul had very little magic for a human to use so he just keeps it there. Frisk and Betty attack, while Miles doesn't at first this causes Helen to get distracted and gets hit a lot.

Betty destroys the old cabin, and they start to fight. Miles knocks Betty down and Helen was still attacking Frisk. Betty summoned her spear and aimed at at Miles soul and throws it impairing Miles soul.

Helen knocks down Frisk grinning then walks over to Miles soul and grabs it. Helen already knew this would happen, and old asked Miles to join him so he can use Miles soul as a weapon.

Helen then uses half of his magic and corrupts Miles soul. Sense Helen used half of his magic he was weak and could be killed easily but didn't realize until later.

Miles attacks Betty and Helen attacks Frisk, but then Helen notices his weapons were starting to crack, then Helen realizes the mistake he made but Frisk stabs Helen where his soul is. Helens soul started cracking but he wasn't going to die.

Helen was losing his magic quickly. he yells at Miles to help him, but Betty slows Miles down but Miles quickly stopped Betty and shot Frisk in the back. Miles then grabs Helen then they run away.

Miles runs into an abandoned farm then sets Helen down and watches everything outside. Helen sits there thinking about what happened, and checked his soul seeing it was cracked. Helen then decides to keep Miles the way he is now then kill him off later to regain his magic.

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This was a quick summary now I will tell you why I rewrote this.

When I finished writing it, I read it, and I didn't like how I ended the chapter, or how I made Miles get corrupted.

Also while I was reading it, it didn't make sense as much as it did when I wrote it.

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This was just a quick little thing I made :3

Bye!