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Chapter 2
P.O.V taemin
Later that day after school I head home, but I see one of my childhood friends. I walk up to him.
Taemin: hey key, long time no see. How have you been?
Key: hey taemin! I've been good. I just came back for the week to visit my parents. It's not easy living away from them. I miss my moms cooking the most.
Taemin: I would guess. How are have they been recently.
Key: they been good. They were so happy to see me. My mom cooked me such a big dinner yesterday. How has school been?
Taemin: *looks down* it's okay.
Key: are you still being bullied? Don’t let them bother you.
Taemin: I know. Well I got to go now.
Key: okay. Do you want me to walk you home?
Taemin: no I'm good. Bye~
Key: ok then. See you later.
I walk home, but I start to feel someone following me. I look back but there was no one there. I start to walk faster and I finally reach my home. I hurry inside and lock the door. I fix me something to eat. I usually do eat much, because I never really get an appetite. I never really thought much of it. I go sit down to watch a movie. I fall asleep on the couch. I wake up in my bed but I don’t know I how I got here. I don’t sleep walk and the door was locked last night. This is strange. I get up and ready for school. I see minho the new transfer student across the street walking out of a house. I didn’t know someone lived there. Did someone move in recently. Minho saw me. He started to walk over.
Minho: hey, how's it going.
Taemin: I didn’t know you lived here. *backing up*
Minho: yea. I just moved in a few days ago. Want to walk to school with me.
Taemin: …..
Minho: don’t be shy I'm not going to bite. *smiles*
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Eternity
Фанфикi live by myself my parents died when i was little. one night i found a stranger in my room he left me terrified, and the next day there was a new student his name was minho for some reason he was interested in me, but i don't know why.
