Uhm...hi? It's been an year and a month since I posted the last chapter for this story and...
I'm not really proud of how this book ended up, the story was first write on my first language and I just put it on the translator, it was not a good idea tho
Not only the writing looks weird and with a lot of typing mistakes, I had no knowledge about the brain and other human things(like how much blood you can lose before you die)
As some people commented, this story is just bitter, everyone is extremely bitter in here, except Michael surprisingly
I do have some concepts already, but not the way the story will be pointed to...
I mean, I have three to four basic ideas for it, I just can't decide and would like some ideas, maybe of what I should do better or what you would imagine a certain character would do
There will be a list underneath with the 'fixed concepts' and the 'changeable concepts/courses the story would go'
The fixed concepts are:
»Alexander having mechanic parts, but focused on his head
»William and Henry being dead
»Elizabeth not being so evil(I do regret making her extremely evil)
»Samuel(Charlie's twin from the books) being one of the main characters
»A bit of romance, but keeping the angst as most of the book
»Alexander being a bissexual ace and Samuel being Gay
»William as a machiavellian
»Vanny appearing in some way
The changeable concepts/courses the story would go:
»Alexander and Samuel being a couple since highschool
»Alexander being a sociopath and sadist(this one with a twist I would not like to reveal)
»Alexander had dated Cassidy before/until she went missing(this could definitely go with the first topic)
»Michael and Elizabeth being alive, she would be famous for owning Fazbear Entertainment
»William being the one who tried to kill his own kids
»Alexander being mute/talking through a music box type of device
»Alexander and Samuel owning Fazbear Entertainment (Elizabeth and Michael must be dead for this to happen)
»Alexander having depression(no trying to kill themselves)
»Dead foster parents and given as a missing child(Alexander having the twist of the sociopath and sadist topic, but not being those two)
»Blond William, blond Michael and blond Elizabeth
»MrsAfton appearing somehow
Some other things I would like to put on the rewrite would be more LGBTQ+ and ethnicities representation, it has been only a year and I notice that my mind changed a lot
I was fourteen when I posted this on wattpad and in two months I will be fifteen, so...(Edit:I actually got my own age wrong here, I would be fourteen in three months when I posted chapter nine)
Please give me some options and ideas, I will definitely give credit if I use any idea, bye
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FNAF - Shadows of the past
Fanfictiona year after Fazbear's fright burn, someone very dear to William Afton will return, a person he has not seen for a long time and that someone will not be on his side, quite the opposite, he will be trying to end his plans once and for all
