okay first, CAPITALIZATION AND PUNCTUATION! SO IMPORTANT OMG.
If you are writing a book, please for the love of Merlin (get it? no? okay ill see myself out) CAPITALIZE PEOPLES NAMES AND USE COMMAS, PERIODS, ECT.
I find it very hard to read a book that goes doesnt have proper capitalization.
[ex;]i looked outside my window and saw birds flying over head. wow so pretty i whispered to myself.
LIKE, BITCH TF IS EVEN THAT? THAT PAINED ME TO EVEN TYPE-
How it should be;
I looked out my window and saw birds flying overhead.
"Wow, so pretty." I whispered to myself.
OKAY? HOW HARD IS THAT.
IF YOU DON'T USE PERIODS, HOW DO I KNOW WHEN THE SENTENCE IS OVER. YOU COULD BE TALKING FOR 3 YEARS AND I WOULDN'T KNOW.
Me rn:
Okay, thats enough for one chapter. *Inhales deeply* *Wonders what the fuck I'm even doing* *Exhales*Okay, bye lovlies<3