Total BS (Don't Read)

My brothers work

So, my brother is doing this story for his class and this is what he wrote so far:

                 On my first day of school I thought while I was on the bus, all the kids were asking me "why are you wearing a helmet?" all at the same time. I was puzzled so I replied, "you don't want to see what is under there". Ok, what really happened is I got a permanent scar on my face and I was born with a stubby nose and a wrinkled face and I don't want people to see so I wear my favorite helmet. I did not want to tell them to that but it was too late everyone was looking at me and whispering "how does he look like?" or "wow I never have seen that before'' well that's what I heard. Ah finally at school I ran through the door but the teacher came to stop me very fast and said "no running in the halls'' so I walked to my locker then went to class " the teacher my class was disturbed when she saw me I said '' what?" She got really mad and took me to the principal's office and they called my parents. I never have seen someone get this mad ever! They called my mom and my mom said some words I don't know. One of them is called Karen. It sounds familiar though I can't put my finger on it. After awhile the principal gave me a map of the school if I got lost. Oh was in the wrong classroom! Soooo this school looks big o a map, it feels like doing a space mission to my classroom. I saw many bigger kids then finally got to my classroom wow just wow I was so early the teacher that the class was getting ready for school the teacher said it is a late start Wednesday whatever that is. So I walked outside to wait but then one of my friends/neighbors came and said "don't you remember, we're late start club floor me!' he said happily as he guided me to the back of the school where big kids were waiting for school. When I got in the teacher came and wanted me to take my helmet off. Obviously, I said no and yet again I got in trouble. So they called my parents and said the same thing as last time. We had a lot of fun until it was time for school. We waited in lines and

            Finally when it was time for school kids were rushing left and right. I was getting dizzy soon. I found my locker, put my stuff in, and got ready for school. I saw my teacher and one of my friends named Ryan from earlier. I thought to myself if I was gonna get a good school year or even get into N.A.S.A! Sometime later after I finished my work we got to do the math though I was lost the whole time. I don't really ask questions because I don't really seem to care because I usually catch up. So we got some homework and we did an icebreaker to get to know each other better. When it was my turn many people asked almost the same question, why do you have a helmet on? I did not want to answer at all so I told them no. The teacher went to the next person and the good thing is I got to learn about new people! So now It was time for more math. After a while we almost finished math then a special came but I quashed what was special in my mind until we got to the art class. ART WAS AWESOME! After some time we went black to class and fished math and went to recess which is my favorite time of day! We had a fun time with my friends. After lunch, we went on and had a regular day and the school was over and my friend was making a small rocket with my dad. we fished after that we made two (with my dad) and raced them with my friends and we had a lot of fun and soon my dad made them with a button that can shoot a water jet and we turned rockets into water guns!!! My family and I ate dinner and went to sleep. (two months later)I was familiar with school now but only floor one there so many more floors it's a pain to get to your class that is all the way up there, just imagine it! Anyways I got to class to see the class was Christmas-themed and different morning work which was easier for me but not Ryan. I did not think the word search was easy until I found the word and told them to others and we as tables worked as a whole to finish the page just like a team."

I am very confuzzled

The story is not done and I will help edit it lol