This is my second story i ever did and just to say i really don't care about captioning i's so you will see me write at i and not this I OK so don't yell at me. and sorry for spelling. also i wouldn't mind feed back so your welcome to post stuff and VOTE!!!!!!!!!! i try my best
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CHAPTER 1
(Cinderella's part)
" Cinderella"!!!!!!! i heard my name. As i got dressed into my little dress and apron and put my long hip length brown hair into a messy bun and run down stairs with a broom in my hand. i open the door where my one out of three evil step-family bedroom is to find her with a very large puddle underneath her. she looked like she peed herself. (My father died when i was 13 and i guess he thought that he left me with a good step-mother and step-sisters to take care of me but that was the total opposite....the first second that he was gone i had been working for the devils). Cinderella this Cinderella that im so sick of it!!!!
" The floor is wet.....clean it up!!!" now this is when i get mad....because there so rude.....no please or thank you or " no Cinderella i'll do that but no. I walk over where shes standing and grasp a mop that SHE WAS HOLDING at do one of my evil glares at her ( that's what i do when i get mad at people because I'm to shy to say it out loud) and start mopping. " Cinderella you don't have to act so sad your only cleaning the house" Alex said and laughing at her stupid joke that only she gets.
(Harry's part)
" Ugh this is so hard how can you not fall off the thing John" i ask and rubbing my bum. " Harry! its a horse not a thing! and its hard at first but then you get the hang of it" said John my older brother getting off of his black horse name shadow and went to get marsh-mellow my bright white horse. John took marsh-mellow by a piece of rope tied on her mouth and bringing her to me. " First you should build relationship with her" he said and taking my hand and putting it on her forehand. She whinnied and walked away with shadow to eat some long grass. i look at John and he point to marsh-mellow so i walk over to her careful not to startled her and climb into her saddle and hold into the reins for dear-life and she slowly started to walk forward then she saw some squirrels in the trees and get spooked and i calmed her down a little than the next thing i new was that i felt pain on my bum and John is trying very hard not to laugh at me because i just got flung off my horse for the second time less then 20mins how embarrassing.
