Successes! Part 2

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                I did it! Dear Wattpad, we did it! The first chapter is up! Time to sit and pretend that I know what I'm doing now! 

                What now? Hmmm I guess I'll try to write something? Get some critiques, that's why I'm here. Be right back I'ma go scrounge through my 3rd grade writing pieces for ideas. Okay back! Here's one about a unicorn (Kind of) I wrote in kindergarten(OOoOoOOooOo! I'm digging deep with this one!).

                Pat, pat, pat. My little feet rushed down the creaky old stairs, movements tense with excitement. I was so close! Just a few more steps and I would be their, to the best day of my life! Smack, my blue  pajama clad feet hit the ground as I jumped over the last 2 steps into the, "Best day of my life!"                                                                                                                                                                                      

                   "Mom! Mom, mom MOM!! It's my day, today!" I screeched in that annoying squeaky voice we all have when were toddlers.                                                                                                                                                   

                    "I heard you the first time Melody. Their's no need to shout." My mother said as I slid, stumbling when my feet hit a red carpet, from the stairs in the dinning room into the living room. I just looked at my mother expectantly as if say, "And you don't need to patronize me on my special day woman." Though probably not with those exact words considering the fact that I had only just literally 4 hours ago.                                                                                                                                                           

                    "Breakfastttttt!"  I whined at her, giving her my infamous puppy dog eyes.                                              

                          She let out a sigh and, sitting up from the ratty living room couch, took my hand saying with both exasperation and a hint of amusement, "Come on I made you some chocolate chip pancakes, your favorite."                                                                                                                                                                   

                          "YESSS!" I exclaimed pumping my tiny fist into the air like a little Ray Slater. Mom sat me down at the dinning room table putting a unicorn shaped chocolate chipped pancake in front of me. "This is really is the best day ever, EVER!" I shouted at my mom, beaming. She shot me back a sleepy smile. "The only thing that could ever make it better would be if 'dis unicorn was a real unicorn!"                                                                                                                                                                                                     

                                "To bad it isn't." Mom gave me sympathetic look, brown hair falling in her face. I stared down at the pancake in front of me and I still swear today that it winked at me.


Quick and sweet. I cut out a lot of crap because that's what was, crap. But anyway hope you like it. Give me all the critiques! cya later


-E



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