i recently got a critique from a reader of my story who goes by the name of yyounggy. she said, "stop trying to be tumblr funny". i have received another critique from my one true trash lyvie mcguire, who has said, "this isn't even a story. there's no plot line, no settings, no character, e.t.c". do you know what I say to this ? fak u. fak u both in the facking armpit. i hoop u both go in the trash for a v long time and don't come out till u smell sooooo bad. i hope u poop straight for 3 years. !!!
