Mafia Story (I don't have a title yet)

Chapter 6:The Chop Shop

Chapter 6 Chop Shop
J and I were searching when I felt something metal.I pulled it up and it was my keys.
" Hey I found th-"I got cut off by the door bursting open by a panicked shirtless guy I had never seen before.He started shouting while panting at the same time
"ROB ROB ROB!"Rob came out of his office.He must have recognized the voice because he wasn't armed this time.
"Yeah what's going on,"Rob asked.You could hear the slight amount of worry that was in Rob's voice at that moment.
"The cops came,busted down the door. I was the only one that got out.I remember one guy had the chop shops address on it."Robs face dropped.It was a mix of oh shoot and disbelief.Rob thought for a second before he said
"Ok we have to get over there now,"I was confused whether that meant me or just Rob and the other guy.That was quickly answered though when Rob looked at me and James then said
"You too guys."So I put my keys in my pocket and we all got in James' car since it was closest to the door.Rob drove it because he knew where the chop shop was along with all the other mafia controlled locations in Boston.We drove for a moment or two before we pulled up and went in.Once Rob got in he called out
"Ray!Ray you there?"We all followed behind him.Who I supposed was Ray emerged out from under a car.
"What's up Rob.Whats going on?"Ray asked.
"Look the cops got this address and they could turn up any second so you have to evacuate this place."Ray was at loss of words.He was looking around the shop.I think to see if there was any evidence the officers might find.He told his men to pack up and drive away to their houses.Right as the last guy left the shop we heard 3 bangs on the garage door.They were here.
(Finn's POV)
I banged on the heavy metal door.There was no side door visible to me so I couldn't use the same technique I used for the fight club.I grabbed the handle of the roll up garage door.It was practically identical to the one at the fight club.I lifted it up and saw 4 guys trying to go out a door in a panicked rush.I tried to get them to stop but they ran.They got in a car and drove away.I wasn't going to give up that easy.I ran back into the car with Ralph and floored the gas.
"This is Finn Reyes to dispatch,I request backup in pursuit of 4 male suspects licence plate unknown."I told dispatch.They took a hard right.I wasn't going to lose them.They drove past a small park.All of a sudden a guy jumped out of the driver seat.I slammed on my brakes.I got out and started running toward him.
"DONT MOVE,DONT MOVE,"Ralph and I shouted in unison.I could tell he was in pain because well he had just jumped out of a moving car.After we threw him in the back of the car.It hit me they had gotten away.
Dans pov
Ray had jumped out of the car!Rob was in a panic but he grabbed the wheel and scooched over the shifter.Rob had a face of worry,slowly the sirens grew more distant.
"Hey Rob can you drop me off at my house,"I asked.He told me he could but he didn't know where I lived so I gave him directions.I lived on the outskirts of North End. Right when we pulled I smiled,it felt good to be home.I checked my pocket and my keys were still there.I walked in and was hit the aroma of my home.It smelled like paper and metal.It was good to me,I liked it.I hung my keys on a hook.Along with my coat.

I plopped down on my bed and took a deep breath.It was relaxing.I checked the time and it was around six.I got up,ate a sandwich and laid back down.My eyes were heavy.I closed them and thought about how crazy my day was.I slowly drifted off into the world of tranquil slumber.