"Name : E̶̡̖̱͉̰̞̟̲̳̯͆̅̎̌̐͗̈̕R̵͍͎̟̙̝̣͙̤̓́͘ͅR̸̨͈̲͎̯̲̗̓͐̀̄̚ͅÒ̵̱͓͙̯̭̰͔̬̯͋̓̍̆̉̚͜R̴͚̭̠̲͖͖̲̒͋̇̑̽̚̚͠͠,̴̛͓̍̑͒͗̈ ̴̡̺̲̱͆͋N̷͕͎̺̫̅̌̉̈́͑̌̈A̴͓̼̘̼̽̎̂̎M̵̧͔̱̜͉̭̩͉̩̀͋̍͒͘͝ͅË̷͉̼̞̭͓͕̫͔̜́̾́̐͌̒̄̋ ̵̘̖͂̂͋͛̀͋Ņ̵̡̨̢̲̟͉͖̆O̶̦̟̞͖̩͑̓̅͂̒̿̕͝T̴͙̗̱̝̥̼͚̜͕̟̈̃̂͒̏̂̈ ̶̡͔͇̭͍̟̞̪͙̓̈́͜F̵̙͕͍̌̔͘͜͜O̴͍̤͕̓̎͐͛̇̑̕͝U̴̢̱̝͚̠̰̇͛͗̋̀͛̈́̈́̕͜N̶̹̩̙̫̯̮͕̦̗͙̈́̍̔͠D̵̳̉̅͑
Nicknames : Unused (unused)
An anonymous OC. Cool.
Fandom : Undertale
Age : Never had a chosen age in the file, but looks around 9-12
Sexuality : Never had one coded in
Gender : They/Them (born female)
No offense but how is your OC a they/them if they were born female? Are they trans?
Species : Human or Unused File
Interesting
Occupation : Child/Game Bug
Ethnicity : Hispanic
Ayyy! Its a latina chika! Lol I watch to much larry.
Family : They where mean too live with Dreamurs, but then the new file (Chara) took that role
So chara replaced your OC? Thats new.
Appreciates : Music, Coding, traveling.
Personality : Straight Forward, Calm, Wise.
I know that this is your OC and all but...I feel like your making her a bit of a Mary sue...
Backstory : B̴͎͑̄ṷ̵͕̭̞͔͉̞̜̠̿͝t̴͇̘̦̝̱̏́̌̓͂͂̊̕̕ ̴̛̭͛̃̉̓͐̑͒́́N̶̳̤̞͇̈ȫ̴̗̪̩̀b̷̨̨͕̱̣̮̹̜̥͚͐̃́̄̑̒o̸̥̠̱̻̲͋̊͝ͅd̷̺͕̬̞̝̯͔͜͝y̷̼͙̮̺̘͊̎̀̃͒͜ ̸̧̯͓̰͍̙̻̽̃̅͑̌ͅͅC̵̢̝͚͍͕̳̘̘̚ȁ̵̢̨̩͍̼̙̖̬͊̓͐̈́m̷͖͕̀̀̂̋̐̌͒͘ẹ̵̡̡͉̺͔͕̰̍̉͐͘͝
Talents : Hacking, Cooking, Baking
I think that you should make her have a bit more talents and maybe a few more fears.
Fears : Diagraphephobia (fear of being erased)
Hates : Big fixers, Shippers, Fan Girls
Likes : Glitches, Food, The Cold
Fashion Style : Only wears one sweater.
So no boots? Or pants? Sorry its just that you weren't being to specific...
Residence : The Void, and a smol snowden in the woods, thats a bunker
Love life: They don't have crushes, having the view of love of a child
Awww.
Other : Can teleport and code stuff, but its hard
Fav Food : RAMEN AND SUSHI YEAH BOI, and coke"
Okay I am done! So I think that the anonymous OC is pretty cool but I feel as if it is missed some major details like character design, other things that the character is good at, and Fears. Other than that good job.
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