Who is she ?

The Surprise

*Mia's POV*

(time skip 'til you are waiting on Josh)

I'm currently waiting on Josh to come and get me so I can get ready to surprise Nessa and tell her I'm staying in her apartment for however long Bryce tells me I'm staying for. I've been standing here about five minutes and I'm looking around until I spot Josh as soon as I see him I let go of all of my bags and suitcases and run up and jump on him to hug him. He doesn't hug back until he realises it's me and then squeezes me I could hardly breathe but let's not tell him that. After I get down off of him I hug Bryce after realizing he was also there. After all that we got in the car and drove to sway to see everyone, Bryce and Josh also told me that Payton is here too. We were all talking until I realised we stopped I quickly hopped out of the car and knocked on the door leaving Josh and Bryce to get my bag. The door finally opens after a minute and there stands Mads in complete shock because I'm standing there and I live half way across the world.

"MADS" I scream in excitement and she snaps back to reality "MIA" she screams back hug her and I cant believe I'm finally meeting her as I never have. Jaden then walks down the stairs with a confused look on his face "Mads why were you scre- MIA what the fuck" he blurts out as he runs up to me, hugging me and lifting me off the ground as I'm the same height as Nessa. " Hiiiii oh wait I have a question" I said as Jaden put me down "Ask away " Mads said "Where is Payton? is he here? " "yeah he's in his room " Mads answered "okay Jaden show me where that is" I said "fine"' after showing me the way he immediately left to go back to Mads. after I knocked on the door I heard a "come in" as I walked in I said "your favourite person is here". he stood there in shock for a moment then ran to pick me up and hug me while still in the hug I whispered " Hi " "Hi " he whispered , after about a minute he finally put me down and asked "Wait why are you here? Since when were you coming here ? Why didn't you tell me? How lo-" "Payt slow down I'm here because my friends needed me. I decided I was coming here last night and Bryce booked me a flight which I am obviously gonna beat his ass for and I didn't even know I was coming I left three hours after I made the decision and I actually have to ask Bryce the last one myself so I'm gonna do that now" I cut him off. With that I left to go find Bryce "BRYCE" I screamed "IM IN THE KITCHEN " he screamed back.  He saw me and said "Hey" "How long am I staying here " I asked impatiently "oh yeah ,um, maybe a month " he said the last part quietly so I wouldn't hear it but I did "WHAT" and with that he's gone running I got so pissed off I just asked Jaden for a ride to Nessa's apartment building.

(time skip to nessa's door)

Jaden's helping me with my plan. He knocked on Nessa's door, when the door opens he says "Hey Ness , a package came to the house for you so I brought it over " and with that I jumped out. Nessa jumped on me causing us both to fall on the floor while hugging "Hey Ness do mind if I stay at your apartment for a month" she looked at me in shock then she screamed "Wait what the fuck, yes I'm never letting you leave " "Jay can you tell Bryce that since he's making me stay here a month he can bring all of my stuff here, please and thanks" with that I was now inside with the door closed so he couldn't say no.

Nessa and I have just sat down to talk and catch up. "So when the hell did you decide you were coming?" she asked me "Literally not even 12 hours ago" "What ?" she questioned me "So here's what happened .After I called you I called Josh because you know him and I are close and he was just so broken , the same with you , and told him and Bryce that I was booking a flight. They tried to make me let them book it but I said no , then Josh and I were talking and Bryce was being too quiet and as I was about ask what he was doing he shouted done and told me my flight was in three hours. When they picked me up from the airport they told me that Payton was also here so I got there and met Mads , Jaden and Payton" I told her "So how was meeting them?" "It was fine it was just like seeing long distance best friend for the first time in a long time like us twenty minutes ago"

After a while we had caught each other up on almost everything when she starts to question me about school "So you're in what year again ?" "Obviously I'm off for the summer right now but I'm going in to my last year" Nessa is confused knowing I'm sixteen and has seemingly forgotten how schooling works in Ireland. I could see the confusion on her face so I answered the unasked question "When you go to secondary school it's six years but when you're in third year, you get the option to do fourth year. We call it transition year or ty and it's basically just doing courses in english irish and maths, that your only going to be redoing in fifth year, and you do work experience like getting an actual job and working once a week and you do a different job each term." "How come you didn't do it though ?" she wondered "Well, for one, my sister told me not to years ago because it was shit and I saw it as a waste of time because, as I said, you'll be going over everything you've done for the people who didn't do ty the next hear anyway so I just don't see the point to be honest." "Yeah, no, I can see where you're coming from"

We got tired after a while and decided to just go to bed.

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I am trying to make everything thing better i'm going to edit chapters i've written already tomorrow because i'm tired and i'm ready to collapse on my bed and i'm not even at home i'm away in mexico on holiday

if you notice a mistake please comment on it so i can fix it. i hope you enjoy the edited version more and that's all from me for tonight

bye bitches xxx