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Seventh Sense

Title- Seventh Sense

Author- CallMeMelody

Genre- Teen Fiction

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"What do you mean, I'm not human?" I ask, confusedly.

"Did I stutter?" Chase mocks, irritation lining his features.

I glare at the demon -I mean, half demon, in front of me. "God, you're such an ass!"

For a moment, he doesn't say anything but suddenly, his glare transforms into a cocky smile. "If you want to talk about my ass, just say so."

[extended summary inside]

[cover by @WrittingNinja]

[#435 in teen fiction 10/1/15]

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Rate: 8/10

First things first, quick note, it say's you reached 435 on 10/1/15... and I live in America so I don't know if you guys put the dates differently or somethings but 10/1/15 hasn't happened yet... It happens in 9 months... Just a thought. Sorry about that. Back to the story! Yay!

Let me remind you guys I love reading your stories and I'm more than happy to review them for you. So. Seventh Sense.Yes, It's Teen Fiction, and it's about a girl that basically finds out she's not who she thought she was her whole life. Ouch. I personally have never read these kind of books, but I'm glad I read this one. Her chapters are the perfect length each time, she never makes you wait too long for a chapter, and for the most part her grammar and such is spot on. The first couple chapters are gonna be the ones that are about her normal life and it'll take a nice easy switch to her new life. In other words, you won't get confused because it was neatly written. I also love how she's not afraid to say bad words, like some stories put signs as bad words and that bugs me. A lot. The only reason I put 8/10 instead of 9 was because I've never read one of these type of stories.

Notes for the author:

To make the story more appealing, I would say take out the synopsis at the beginning. Giving the reader little information can help them be dragged into the story more since they don't know what's gonna happen. Either edit your description to fit in some of your synopsis, which I would be happy to help if you want, or keep it the way it is and delete the synopsis. Maybe you could put in an authors note replacing it and mentioning the writing contest, but I think the other things can lose the readers attention for someone who hasn't read this type of thing. Man, this is the longest review I've ever written. I love how you include a quote at the beginning of chapters, I love the pictures you include, I love your writing, and the only thing I really had to say that bugged me was the synopsis. Thank you for reaching out to me, and I hope this helped some!