Frenemies (rewriting)

Chapter 1

One day, I was out hunting with my friends. That was what we did together often. It was nessesary for me and my friends because we did not have cars and it would take a whole day to go to the town. We ate on fresh meat that we took back to our houses from when we went hunting. We were standing and crouching as still as a rock and I had my bow raised. We did not have guns becuae it is forbidden to shoot an animal. I shot at a boar. We were tracking this boar for a long time. It seemed hurt but it was not dead. My friends then released their bow and the arrows rained down on the boar. The boar roared, staggered, and with one last effort, roared again, then collaped. " Wow, that was fun," Thomas said in a sarcastic manner. Maximum siad, "Let's get this boar out of here before it family attacks us." We nodded, and silently pulled the dead boar away. We skinned the boar, fired the skin, ate it as a snack and then cut the other parts off. We split each piece off equally. The way that we split is up equally was by the bigest piee goes to the biigest family which was Jack's family with five sibblings. I usually got the smallest piece because I was now an only child. We said our goodbyes and then walked away. I went to my house and fried up the piece of meat I got on the fire. I called my father and he came down and ate with me. Then, I went to be. I did not dream of anything that night. The next morning I went outside, and went to the campsite where Thomas was waiting for me. Thomas I think is the most like me because he is homeless. He ran away from his family because he was abused. He lives in town and he ran away. When I met him, he was almost dead. I gave him a bed and took care of him by using herbs. He slowly got better over time and I started to leanr more about him. His personality was like mine but Thomas's backround was the opposite. HIs father was working for a gang in his hometown and when he axsadentaly did something wrong, the gang beat him up as a punishment for what his father did. The gang forced Thomas's father to watch. The last time they beat him up, they made him be half naked and they whipped him bloody. Then, he ran away after he was released. When I met Thomas, he was bleeding out and covered in scratches. His clothes was torn. I felt bad for him and I was scared he was going to die. I mixed together some herbs and made it into a pulce but chewing it up. I did not have a smasher and a pot so that was why I chewed it up. Then, he healed very quickly. He woke up and we became close friends ever since. We excaped the police many times. So when I saw him, I hugged him and we waited for our friends. We did not have to wait long After ten minutes, everyone was there and I said " I foound a place to go." We argued and we took a vote and we decided to go to the place. I will get into detail right here. We were walking through the woods We were very silent because we did not have anything to say. Then, we saw the place that I found. It was an abandoned nuclear power plant. Jason asked, "Are you sure that this is a safe place?" I said " I do not know. You all decided to come with me. I did not say that it was safe." That got me glares from everyone but they did not go back. We checked out the place and it was full of equipment and full of tubes. There were still some traces of radiation becuase we had a headache after. We spent half of the day in there and when we went out, we hunted. I thought that it would be a day like any other. We hunted birds with stones and we hunted rabbits. Then when we got back, I felt like there was someone watching. I think my friends also felt it and they froze. I saw a shadow and I started to warn them but then people came and put a bag on my head. I struggled but I was knocked unconsious.

WHen I woke up, I was in a white room and I was in bed sheets. I only had some time before the guards half dragged, half carried me. Then, I was seated in a room. All of my friends was there. My friends are Maximum, Poly, Jack, Thomas, Jason, and me. A man came into the room. The man said, "We have been watching you since you kids were still infants. We picked you especially becuase you guys are more stronger than usual kids your age. So, we talked to your parents and they said okay. You also have a choise." I thought about it and I remembered how when I was young, I wanted to be a superhero. So, I agreed which I regreted later. One by one, my friends said yes. So, we stripped off our shirts and they put many shots in. Then, the guards put me in a chamber. I was confused because I thought that they were going to do tests on me. Then, there were fire. I was not scared and I do not know why. I had a feeling that I should be scared but I was not scared. I was seeing black and I thought Well, this is the end. I trusted someone who I never knew. The first thing that kids learned is not to trust strangers and you trusted a man that you never knew and then he told you he would test you. For all i know, he just wanted to me to die. Then, I saw a figure walking toward me. He did not look like god becausehe di not shine like a god. The figure came closer and said "Calm down, child. You are not dead yet. Well, you body has been burned into ash but your soul has not been killed. I want to give you a choice because you feel different. You can be rebirthed, go to heaven, or become my servant and become the reaper of souls. I would not put you in this position alone, though. My brothers is asking all of your friends. So, would you like to become my servant? I thought about that, and said, "Yes, I would like to become your servant." Now, you might think that Wow, Jake! You made a mistake once and then you made a mistake once again! He must be stupid! You would be correct but think about yourself if you were in a confusing situation where you were have been put in pain and being burned in a fire, and the to top all of that, you meet a figure that you can not see and you do not know if your dead or not. So, of course, you would confused and i did not want to die. The figure looked pleased and then a bright light came. A figure appeared from that light and said, "What in heaven's name are you doing here, Lucifer?" The figure-Lucifer- laughed and said "I made this person into the reaper of souls." The light made figure shook his head and looked disappointed but also relieved. Then, in a blink of eye, the figure disappeared. The man- Lucifer- put his hands on my head, and then I felt hot. I looked at myself it looked that I was made out of fire. I looked him with a question in my eyes. He laughed and said "My realm is very hot and is made out of lava. If you had your flesh, you would burn to death. All though, you would not die because you are all ready dead. Do you really want to burn all the time?" I shook my head. Then, he rubbed his hands and told me to follow him. He started to walk to a black thing that was way darker than the pitch blackness around me. Then, he talked "This is called a portal. That is two types, one made of demonic magic and one that is made of angelic magic." We walked through the portal and I was in a landscape that was everything that I thought as hell. All the things, that lacked was human souls. It was full of heat.