Eyooowww! I can still see that there's a lot reading this story and i just wanna saaayyy that, I'm open for criticisms so that i can improved my writingsssss!
Don't think that you'll hurt author's feelings because for me its like a good feedback for the writer to let us know where else we are lacking.
But stilllll enjoy the story and sorry for wrong grammars and errors and everything you find messyyyy!
Keepsafeeee everyoneee! (｡’▽’｡)♡
