BULLETPROOF (bts×reader)《Editing!》

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When I tried adding yun-hees stutters in the last chapter it wouldn't let me but just pretend every time she spoke she stuttered.

Namjoons weight: 51 kg

Jimins weight:45 kg

Yoongis weight:60 kg

《Edited》

~your new member~

*Jins POV*

We open the door to hear we are bulletproof p.2 playing we look in the room to see a girl who is perfectly dancing along with her eyes closed"uhhhh hyung i think this is the wrong room" jungkook said "yeah I think the lady got the room wrong" jimin said "wait a sec...............that's the girl from yesterday" hobi said "ommo it is" tae said the song ended the little girl opens her eyes she probably sees us in the mirror she spins around "hi?" She said unsurely(?),quietly and kinda nervously

"ah hello are you jang yun-hee?" sejin asks walking into the room "y-y-yeah" she said "okay! Nice to meet you.
Boys come here" sejin says we all walk over to him "this is your new member" sejin said pointing at yun-hee "h-h-hello" yun-hee said bowing 'she's very polite' "hello" we say in unison bowing "introduce yourselves" sejin said "I'm seokjin nice to meet you again" I said giving her a small smile.

"I'm yoongi" yoongi said in a moto-tone voice looking at her, she looks up at him through her hair 'cute' I thought looking at her 'wait what?' I thought 'that's creepy' I thought 'hm eh she is cute' "I'm your hope your my hope im j-hope,but just call me hoseok or as I would much prefer hobi" hobi said smiling,she gives him a little, shy smile 'awwww'

"I'm jimin but you can call me whatever you want" jimin said giving her his famous smile "I'm taehyung but you can call me taetae tae or any other nickname you can come up with" tae said "I'm jungkook" jungkook said, looking at her, she looks up at him, he pushes his tongue against his cheek (you know what im talking about right?) His eyes holding the same hint of nervous, scared and worried as they did yesterday 'This isn't good' I thought looking at him

"n-n-nice to m-m-meet y-y-you g-g-guys i-im y-y-yun-hee" she said bowing "well ill let you guys get to know each other have fun, be nice." Sejin said walking away "hi yun-hee" tae said "uh h-hi" she said looking down "you dance nicely" hobi said "t-t-thank y-y-you" she said i look at what she's wearing a long sleeve cropped shirt and camo pants 'isn't she hot, no nononono she can't be like us shes to young'.

*Namjoons POV*

Shes quite short, Shes very pale, shes pretty skinny. "do you want to dance with me" hobi asks "s-s-sure" she said. I watch as they dance to fire she's pretty much perfect she's wearing a long sleeve cropped hoodie 'she has to be hot in that I hope she isn't like us'.

*Jimins POV*

Shes really short im not the shortest any more she's a really good dancer "she's so small" tae said "I know" jin said "look" jungkook said pointing at her "what?" Jin said "she's so skinny" he said "I agree she is pretty skinny."  Yoongi said. 'Wouldn't she be hot, but I guess its a cropped hoodie so it wouldn't be that bad she can't be like us'

*Taehyungs POV*

I watch as hobi and yun-hee dance they are now dancing to boy with love shes getting every move right. there are a couple of things that i have noticed is shes really skinny and the other thing is she's wearing long sleeves 'is she like us she can't be right?'

*Yoongis POV*

She's pretty good at dancing it's quite hot today and she has long sleeves on 'I hope she's not like us'

*Jungkooks POV*

Shes really skinny too skinny i saw what being underweight did to yoongi, Namjoon and jimin it was really scary Namjoon and jimin still aren't a healthy weight all three still have problems eating. 'Isn't she hot in that. Is she like us if she i wanna help her. I might not want a new member but she seems okay'

*Hoseoks POV*

I sit down watching her dance still shes has a lot of energy shes really skinny I can kind of see her ribs the song stops i clap "that was really good" I said "t-t-thank y-you" she said bowing "um well that was really good" Namjoon said "do you wanna go to the dorms so you know where it is" he asks "y-y-yes please" she said "okay" Namjoon said "ill j-j-just g-g-grab m-my s-stuff" she said Namjoon nods she walks over to a bench she grabs her phone and turns the music off I jump up she grabs a bag "okay done" she said "you have everything" jin asks she nods "okay let's go" Namjoon said we start to walk. We are in the elevator shes standing next to tae there is a viable gap between them "sooo yun-hee do you like kpop" tae asks "y-y-yeah" she said "cool what groups" jungkook asks surprisingly
"uh y-y-you g-guys txt m-m-monsta x i-i-itzy m-m-mamamoo exo nct d-d-dream s-s-stray k-kids g-g-got7 a-ateez s-s-seventeen b-b-blackpink" she said "cool" tae said *ding* we all walk out of the elevator we watch as yun-hee runs over to a girl with brown hair "s-seo-yoon-ssi" yun-hee said hugging her "oof yun-hee-ah!" the lady said hugging her we walk over to them "hi" she said "hello" we say bowing "I would bow but I have a little human squeezing me to death" she said "that's okay" jin said "I'm going to gather you guys are bts" she asks "yea" Namjoon said "well take care of my child" she said "your her mother?" Tae asks "no I wish I was i just like calling her my child" she said "oh" tae said.

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23/12/20