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  • Violet Sky
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    The sun disappears and the world goes dark. Steven has to prepare for the worst to survive the events that may unfold. I would like some feedback as this is my first publication. I'm thinking of writing as a serious career and need all the tips I can get early on. Tell me about misuses of words, pacing issues, lacklus...

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