Teenage Vampyrs, Enchanteds, and Shapeshifters join the Otherworlder Academy to train to fight off a demon horde and save the Otherworlder realm. Welcome to the rewrite of The Otherworlders! (This is v2 version, which explains the odd read to vote ratio, btw) :-) Anyway! If you're new, just a little info: ★ MY READERS...
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I placed my hand on the doorknob, jumping slightly as it swung open on its own accord. That was strange; my mother was a careful woman--she would never leave the door unlocked. Chalking it down to the affects of her illness, I pushed open the door and stifled a gasp when a suffocating atmosphere hit me hard. I choked...
It's hard to resist a spark, but what if that spark is with someone you completely despise? What if you're pushed towards someone, no matter how hard you try to pull away? What if you just can't escape them? What if you have no choice but to give into your feelings? Rain and Jake have a connection; romance begins to...