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Merely Human or Something More

An almost death experience can change a person. Lexington Grant felt that change the day of the incident. But how do you deal with change when you can't explain what's happening to you or why? Time doesn't seem to help. And four years later that feeling of something missing is still there, and it's not just her memory...

One Brief Shining Moment

A young and impressionable Elizabeth Bruce begins an illicit affair with President John F Kennedy, and must decide if one brief shining moment in a Camelot era world is worth destroying everything she holds dear. *...

BOY KING (CFTM Prequel)

FROM THE AWARD-WINNING AUTHORS OF THE CHEATER.FAKER.TROUBLEMAKER SERIES (WATTY'S 2016, FICTION AWARDS 2016, HACHETTE AUDIO 2017), JENNY ROSEN & KRISTEN MAGLONZO. After bullies, braces, and brutal heartbreak shatters his faith in love, soon-to-be freshman & former geek, Elias King, spends the summer growing into his ne...

Control

When Atlanta gets mixed up in a world filled with the impossible, she begins to question everything she thought she knew about the world. *** Atlanta Dawn has spent years running from her past, avoiding the scars caused by childhood ordeals. But when Atlanta saves Dameon Emerit from a fight her carefully controlled wo...

Sims Big Brother 1

Fifteen sim houseguests partake in an adventure that will change their lives. Each sim is competing for a grand prize of $500,000, by being cut off from the outside world and forced to participate in competitions until one sim is left standing.

Where There Is Nothing

In the middle of the night a stranger calls upon an orphanage for the expertise of Father Arthur Dolling, as he soon discovers that the lines between reality have begun to blur, and the only way to uncover the truth is to delve deeper into the dark underbelly of the inhabitants that remain in the god fearing town of R...