Critisize Stories

I wrote these lyrics and am looking for input from others, please leave a comment obout what you think! Constructive critisizm is encouraged!

Poem based in Walt Whitmans writing. Exposes my soul but I want to post it. COMPLETED

You would think it started when Lucy found the newspaper report, but it all began much earlier than that. Lucy when confronted with with news of her past sets out on a j...

Do you have questions? I may or may not have half intelligent answers! If you have any questions about characters, books, updating schedules, or anything really, that yo...