Firstbookeverwriten Histoires

Hey who ever decides to read this.. I'm 13 and I've read a ton of great books I love and I have always wanted to make a story that goes more of the way I want. This is just something fun for me to do since I wanted to see what I could come up with. Beware it is not written by a real author it is written by a middle schooler! Anyways if you go read this I hope your ok with it. Comment anything bad or good if you do read this..