Kakashihi Histoires

*I will be editing past chapters for grammatical fixes. The story will not change.* I just want to use this to get me out of my comfort zone; this will be the first story I've written. Criticism is welcome! I want to improve at writing so if there's something you recommend let me know please. Chapter one gives a little background story. It's about a girl named Rin Ereseld and she took a huge role in ninja events in the past. She recently awakens from being frozen in Ice (that'll be explained). However, she doesn't realize how long it's been. She meets many ninja along the way along with one named Kakashi Hatake. Also this is related to the Naruto story. Just not 100%. I'm just going to say it's in the time period where Naruto is out training with Pervy Sage. I of course do not own Naruto. There will be one or two characters who are not real in this story, and it'll be easy to figure out who. Yes there will be mature content but I haven't made it that far yet.

The bandages that covered his face in life have fallen away, all incinerated and hanging loosely around his neck. His face is completely destroyed. Unrecognizable. The skin covering his face is no longer there, all having melted away. His blood vessels have all burst, his nerves have fried along with the majority of his muscles. His jaw opens and closes a little bit. His eyes bore into me. They're large and round and completely accusing. His teeth are covered in bits of burnt muscle. I feel my heart thudding in my chest. He steps closer, closer. His bone gleams in the dim light. As he closes in on me, a pounding noise begins ringing through my ears. My heart beat- ba-dum. Ba-dum. Ba-dum. It looked like he had been tossed into a fryer, fried alive, and he had been. By me. I did this to someone. I killed someone's team mate, someone's son. I killed someone's important person. -- Kimiko Kioku, a memory keeper. Never forgets anything, always notices, from the exact way the wind blew her hair against her face to coloring with her brother at five to the lullaby her mother would sing to her as she rocked her when she was not even a year old. She remembers. She remembers the blood, the glassy, clouded over eyes her brother had as he said his last words. She remembers the very first person she killed. She remembers how abandoned she feels, and how everything always feels like it's falling apart at the seams. (Can you say 'worst summary ever to exist'? Okay, maybe not that bad. But still pretty bad.)