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A new breed of magic has caused the Vrakuul homeland to begin to die. The Vrakuul have come to Everand to seek a new home for survival and have been met with distrust. After a long discussion, the leaders of the human nations allow Lochlan Willis the opportunity to come to a diplomatic meeting for them to explain their arrival, where he learns of this magic that is killing their land. Lochlan then places an ad for sell-swords to go on an expedition to the Vrakuul country to which a human, dwarf and Truffian are hired to join. The expedition is led by Lochlan with a total of 10 men and once there, members of their group begin to disappear one by one by unknown causes. Before long it is just the four of them left and they must work together to fight the source of this magic before it spreads to the rest of the world

Somethin non canon for my OCs, asking for constructive criticism!