This is, to me, a short story. I'm aware it doesn't really give you much, but that's the whole idea! I will be using this excerpt as an opening paragraph to a proper story (River River) however I really wanted to share it as it is as my first piece of writing! I think it's great to read something so deep yet so vague, in order to be able to create your own background, character profiles and potential endings to someone else's story because it allows you to really think for yourself, become involved in a deeper more meaningful way on all scales and may even spark ideas for your own stories!All Rights Reserved