Forgotten Brother (Stopped for now)

This story is going to be kinda about anime called Brothers Conflict. My idea is to add one more brother that is somewhat similar to me and somewhat it will be also AU thing in many situations. The story is mostly written from 14th brother point of view. who is actually famous song writer. I'm gonna use many songs what i like as characters creations. I am a rather big fan of music because I really like the lyrics. I'm not good at writing yet so please forgive me if I make typing mistakes and please give honest feedback how else I can change the out come and get better. and your suggestions are always welcomed.