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I will review on grammar, plot line, character development, story flow, and overall affect. <3
Also, I will not read your whole story. I will read the first five chapters. If there is a specific chapter you want me to read, I can do it, just tell me which chapter.
(I will not review your story if it is rated R, 18+, or PG-13 for sexuality. Kissing is fine, light making out is allowed as well, and I will review stories with gay couples. I will not review your story if it has sex in it.)
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