the tale of 2 furrs

this is the story of 2 furrs by the names of leon and jacob, when they first saw each other it was love at first sight and they didn't even know it. This is my first book (that is not an in class assignment) so please instead of hate comments just tell me if there is a spot I need to improve on (seriously please). Every little bit helps even if it's the smallest bit of inspiration, it goes a long way. Thanks