Making a series of no good, very bad decisions. This story is unfinished and pretty unedited, so if you run across something that doesn't make sense, no you didn't. Things I already know are messed up: -Once Cora kills Ignius the Abara's are supposed to find him hanging from a tree outside their house (put there by the Revels to scare the Abara's) at the end of chapter ten but I forgot to write that scene - Also once Ignius dies he's not really mentioned again, that's my b - I forgot to write Amar telling Cora about Elrik's past in the field in chapter five so the thing Cora says to Elrik after he heals her doesn't make any sense - Chapter ten is not finished, which is why it ends so abruptly, sry - Most of the "fight" scenes are unfinished bc I don't like writing them - The magick system is not fully fleshed out, so don't think too hard about it - I kind of didn't know what to do with Tom and Scott after chapter fourteen so they go to stay at a friend's house?? lol whatever - There's a time jump starting at chapter eleven, if that's not clear
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