The Reyburn Contracts: Orion

A once peaceful town is now haunted by a mystery rendering the streets dangerous to walk at night. A crimson-clad bounty hunter is sent to solve the case, a bounty hunter who specializes in bringing in or taking down mages and monsters. Equipped with his mind, magic, and an old six-shooter, he is tasked with bringing in an emissary of the Void.

This is my first story I've written in many years, and it's my first story to be placed on a public platform. With it being my first, I freely welcome any criticism, though preferably constructive criticism would be more helpful. Since I've never shown others my work, that means I've never been able to get others' perspective on what's right or wrong with my writing. I know what I think is wrong, but I'd like to hear what others think could be better. I just ask that if there was anything you felt I did right, be sure to let me know. That'll help me avoid changing anything that was done right or that I do well in any future stories or if I revise this story.