In the Twinkle of an Eye

Do you ever look around and get the feeling that you could peel back what you see before you? That the reality you see isn't quite what it seems to be? Kaiser has those feelings too, but pushes them into the back of his mind as everybody seems to laugh it off and tell him he's crazy. But is he? Vast spaces of land keep vanishing into thin air, but nobody seems to be questioning why. Through a string coincidences, Kaiser comes to find a book that changes everything, allowing all of his dreams to come true, and finding out the true nature of his reality.

This is the first draft and any feedback on structure, pacing and writing would be much appreciated. I hope you all enjoy!

Cheers.