The Tale of Jade and Onyx

This is a Steven Universe inspired fan fiction involving a Jade who was easy-going and was created incorrectly, without feeling diamonds as gods, more as dictators who are pretty bad at their job, and an Onyx, who, similar to Jasper, came out perfect and became the perfect soldier, only desiring to become a royal guard, protecting the diamonds from any threat with a death wish. I don't want to give away to much, so i'll leave it at that. None of the pictures are my own, i just found them on google images. Feel free to leave a comment about how to improve my story.