Niraja

The first one s the one u need to work on... the emotional connect s pretty lacking.. and U need to improve ur feel... see I'm just telling u in case u need sum tips... that's it ... but then that s also really gud... try to improve ur wordings nd a bit more of feel shud do it... *if u don't mind...* :)

@z_nammy19 Thanks a lot...I'm glad that you liked it;)

And also the nxt one abt music... melody s remedy s also gud.. :*))