----Heather----

It's the next day, so I'm back. I'm here with my squishy froggy ball, he doesn't have a name yet, but I'm working at it. Going to have to do my homework soon. Shame, but my art homework is only to take pictures. Happy time! 
              Well, annoy you tomorrow,
                                   Magicpupy  ;D

p.s. I'm going to comeback tomorrow, and the day after that and the next day and the next day and the next day and the next day and the next day and the next day and the next day and the next day and the next day and the next day and the next day and the next day and the next day and the next day and the next day and the next day and the next day and the next day and the next day and the next day and the next day and the next day and the next day and the next day and the next day and the next day and the next day and the next day and the next day and the next day and the next day and the next day and the next day and the next day until you have a rant at me, go on I can take it.... But can you? *Insert evil theme - tune here* Mwhahahahahahahaha!

Heather, you might want to put a few more tags on your stories, also you're style of writing is, ummm, developing. In kisses from a prince it's really stereotypical fairytale sort of wording (soz if this doesn't make sense) e.g. once upon a time, just cos it's a fairytale doesn't mean it has to be worded like sleeping beauty ect. While in breakup and makeup is sort of flat if you know what I mean. You don't? Well... Both chapters are way to short, kinda boring, both go straight into the story (more background info or something needed) they both kind seem like 'tasteless filler' as my mum calls it. You really need to expand and build on what you have, there's also quite a few careless mistakes e.g. bad grammar, capital letters in the wrong place or in the middle of words (knOw wHat I'm taLkiNg aBouT?) I'm not having a rant for rant's sake or saying bad things about your work cos I don't like you (I don't even know you) But if you want to get better you need to be told your mistakes so you can learn from them (teachers do this to(at my school anyway)) btw, how old are you, you don't seem that old (this is when I find you're older than me) If you're offended, go ahead, read my work and have a rant, I'm always open to being told ways I can improve. Or do it anyway, I know you want to.... 
               I'll be waiting for your rant,
                                 Magicpupy  ;D