Derby Scooter

I think I’m at the right point to ask for feedback.
          I’d love to know your thoughts on Abhi’s character, Akshu’s character, their relationship, or anything else you’d like to see explored further.
          You can share your thoughts anonymously through this link:
          https://tellonym.me/user.54425067

Okay so I wrote another book/story called Destiny.
          The idea came to my mind a few days back... 
          It was actually like a short romantic story but I was able to split it up in parts.
          It is complete and available to read.
          Enjoy! 
          :)

I will try to publish the next chapter and close this track soon.
          But I am going to be busy for a while so the story will be paused until I can resume again.

Please feel free to drop any feedback or anything you’d like to see as part of Abhi and Akshu’s story. I will try to distill it into my imagination. :)