Symphony_rose
Are you perhaps a adventure quest world player too
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Hey ya'll! how's everybody doing?
Rubyfanguy12
Yo if you don’t mind me asking, I see you’re reading my RWBY story and I wanted to know what you thought of it? I put a pretty good amount of effort into writing it and I would like some feedback if you don’t mind it ^w^
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The story is great, the writing is pretty good. Although it uses the same concepts as most of the RWBY fanfics where it just goes through the episodes of the show with the reader inserted into it, though I do love the original things you put in there such as the reader's backstory or powers, I especially love what you did with volume 4, I just wish you could do more original chapters rather than just copy and paste what happens in the show to add a bit more uniqueness to it, and to at least stand back from the main plot/story a little bit and focus more on the tiny things like, (y/n)'s relationship with the cast, maybe talk a little bit more about (y/n)'s past life or even just some random stuff. like what they do with filler episodes in animes. But overall the story is really great in my opinion, I adore the little references thrown in there as well, I can see that you're really having fun in writing the story and putting your heart into it. Keep up the good work man!
CherryTheDemon12356
Thanks for following me back! ⟵(๑¯◡¯๑)
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No problem
One_Day_Blue
Howdy, friend! Have a good day! And thanks for the follow! Ciao~!