PLEASE HELP ME IM TRYING TO MAKE A BOOK AGAIN AFTER BEING ON A BREAK FOR LIKE 4 MTHS SO WHIXH ONE SOUNDS BETTER “and there’s no remedy for memory your face is like a melody” or “fall into the night as I gaze into you. Shine so bright it’s all I could do” I think the second one with a bit of cuts on the last part bc the title is called shooting stars??
@-1800VIOLET_MONOMA personally i like the first one but you should go with your gut, both are really nice. but also considering the context with the stars, i think the second one would be better.