Hi Muramasa ^0^) or should I just call you Aldo? ^-^)
There are so many typos.. here and there.. even from the beginning.. especially.. words that don't supposed.. to be combined together.. I think you should check and edit.. your novel.. even tho.. it is completed already.. since I think that.. ppl won't.. vote for your novel.. if it has a lot of grammar or spelling mistakes :)
Thanks for reading ^o^)