-CIMUTCHO

Posting new chapter soon…

-CIMUTCHO

GIVE ME MOTIVATION TO WRITEEE

Zer0Username

@BI-QUEEN-FOR-ANIME Adult Taiju is appropriately reformed and a hot business man.  Definitely approve.  Inui makes a very good yandere/red flag depending on how he is written. Toman era Hakkai was a major red flag.  Senju definitely had some orange flag tendencies.  She's very intense like her brothers.
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BI-QUEEN-FOR-ANIME

@Zer0Username Omg I love you , prolly not kazutora , but I'm trying to find a red flag that is still alive and not apart of Bonten... Maybe we do my man Taiju??
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Zer0Username

@-CIMUTCHO ✨ Motivation ✨ Maybe let yourself go partially down a rabbit trail?  Like the Queen said above maybe decide what you want to be the background lore and that should give you some ideas for fleshing things out.  Keep things in your general tone for the story but maybe let yourself explore a person or situation more than you normally would.  It can be something that adds fullness to the story without directly contributing to progressing the storyline.  It can be more of a slice of life moment and can exist within the story. Just some ideas if you want to change it up.  
            
            For example: they all are finding y/n to be distracting.  You could show when the distraction hits, how it hits, if it is noticeable to the others, how y/n interprets it, etc.  Have Bonten have a y/n is a distraction meeting/support group to not start eating y/n.    They definitely get together to gossip and trade information about her anyway.  Have them discuss strategies to keep her in the dark.  Show their (incorrect) perspective on how she interprets things.  Compare her happy-go-lucky attitude to her actual thoughts and conclusions about what is going on.  It would make it interesting over time to see the difference in Bonten's and her perspective and the  misunderstandings caused due to it.
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