I've finished my editors notes for my short story I'd done a while back. I'll be posting it in parts, and I would appreciate any feedback, comments, critiques, positive, negative, anything anyone would like to add or say about it. One of the best ways to get better at writing is to hear from you audience. So please feel free to add anything. I'll post as often as I can, but I will be doing my best to avoid what I would feel to be "small" parts.