-Kipi-

Thank you so much for getting my first story to 1000 reads! This means a lot to me and I hope that you enjoyed reading it. If you haven't read it yet I would really appreciate it if you took a look at it. Anyways, thank you again for the reads. 
          	
          	Love, Kipi

Vaya56

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bungobolly165

I don’t know if I have the words to describe how much I love this story! You’ve captured the characters  and their personalities perfectly and I love how your writing is concise but also very descriptive. I also appreciate the suspense you’ve included; they’re not just together immediately but you’re developing the whole plot and anticipation. I love it! I’m only in chapter 2 but it’s so well written and exciting that I don’t want to read it too fast and it be over so I’m like reading a half chapter a day to draw it out Thanks again for your talent!

bungobolly165

Oh jeez, my english was way off up there I meant to say “The way that Ranpoe was prodding Dazai for Information was so accurate, definitely something nosy Ranpoe would do”*** not grandpa lmao
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bungobolly165

Ofcourse! I just finished it and was in tears, the execution was so vivid and emotional and Dazai’s response was also so heart wrenching!  Also the way that Rompão was prodding Dazé for information was so accurate, definitely something nosy grandpa would do and it was such a great setting for Dazai’s feelings to be uncovered Even to the reader because we didn’t know exactly how Dazai felt until then. And again about the ending, You developed the story so well making the reader want so desperately for them to be together again and it’s like I could feel their heart’s ache for one another, so very touching and how it ended in heaven was SO rewarding! Best romance novel I’ve ever read! Thank you for your reply and again for your moving writing! Sorry for the long response, I could go on all day
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-Kipi-

@bungobolly165 Thank you so much for your kind feedback!  I'm glad that you like it and took the time to tell me, I enjoyed writing it very much so I hope that you find the ending enjoyable.
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