『☏ʟᴇᴍᴏɴ~sʜxʀᴅs☏』

OKAY I NEED SOMEONE TO AGREE WITH ME BERE-
          
          If you can find a bad enough SmUt- the comments are SO FUNNY
          
          Like I've seen funny comments before- but the funniest ones being on FREAKIN SMUT?!?!?
          
          I don't read it a lot,
          Only when I get reaaallly bored, and half the time I just read it for the comments 

I need people to tell me if my story is actually good or not because I feel like I'm over working myself on it